1st Version.............................................
2nd Version..........................................
These two images are of the same thing, of a poster seen at top that says to report any suspicious activity. I've discussed the meaning behind it and that it entails but it really says more when the entire piece is put together. The 2 drawings I've provided show 1) what the very first version looked like waaaaaay back, and 2) what the NEW VERSION looks like.
2nd Version..........................................
These two images are of the same thing, of a poster seen at top that says to report any suspicious activity. I've discussed the meaning behind it and that it entails but it really says more when the entire piece is put together. The 2 drawings I've provided show 1) what the very first version looked like waaaaaay back, and 2) what the NEW VERSION looks like.#1 looked too 'flag-like' and was extremely rough and crude. It has nice contrasts, but technically.. eh.
#2 is far more superior technically and still carries over some contrast with greys. Not too much black going on, but it's balanced by whites. The greys are nice too. I'm not too happy about the imperfect vertical lines.... but eh, I think it gives it that workmanship's touch so it doesn't look 'mechanical.'
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